Leaving

Jul. 20th, 2011 06:02 pm
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Title: Leaving
Author: [livejournal.com profile] morrobay1990
Genre: post canon
Warning:
Word count: 350
Disclaimer: Jack & Ennis are AP's
♥ Jack








Leaving




The fire was going, coffee done, eggs and potatoes in the pan, ready to turn.

“Why don't we stay a couple more days.”

Ennis flipped the eggs, moved the potatoes around, and waited for Jack to answer.

“Supposed to leave tomorrow...what about your job? Ain't you gonna have to be back on time?”

“Quit.”

“Why'd you quit?”

“You talk too much...gimme your plate.” He shoveled the food onto Jack's plate and handed it back.

“Ennis, why'd you quit your job?”

Ennis picked up his cup of coffee, drank some and grimaced, “Why'd you have to forget the damn sugar? Coffee tastes like crankcase oil.”

“So what're you gonna do for money?”

“You keep talkin, I'll be happy to leave tomorra.”

“So let me get this right...you wanna stay so we can fuck, but you won't tell me anything about what's goin on back home.”

Ennis frowned at that, then sighed and looked at him, “Quit 'cause he wouldn't give me the time off...said I only been there six months, couldn't take two weeks off, nobody to fill in for me.”

“So what're you gonna do?”

“There's always some place needs help...don't worry me.”

“That's about the only good thing about workin for Lureen's old man, least I can get off a couple times a year...wish it was more.”

“So, we stayin a couple more days, or what?”

“Hell, yes, we're stayin...”

Jack got up and dropped his untouched plate of food to the ground, got to the other side of the fire, Ennis getting to his feet, ready...waiting.

“I ain't nearly done with you yet...”

Jack came at him so hard Ennis lost his balance and they went down, rolling in the dirt until Jack was on top.

Ennis said, “Ain't done doin what?”

Jack shoved hard against him, “Whatever you want me to do, darlin...”

Date: 2011-07-21 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sjmarv.livejournal.com
Damn, lady, you are writing some hot stuff lately. Is the heat wave stoking your fires?

Not that I'm complaining, mind you! LOL!

Susan

Couple of day

Date: 2011-07-21 02:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joetheone.livejournal.com
Just showing how much he loves Jack to quit his job to be with him was really nice. Joe

Date: 2011-07-21 06:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tizi17.livejournal.com
thank you again..

and looking at the picture... i am SURE there MUST have been sweet moments between them. we didn't read them in the story nor saw them in the film - but there must have been.. and that thought makes things even sader, no?

Date: 2011-07-21 06:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soulan.livejournal.com
That part where Ennis wouldn't give Jack a straight answer was just heartbreaking, yet so Ennis.

Your last few one-shots have been fantastic.

Date: 2011-07-23 07:02 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lightning070
Nice story. :) A bit sad Ennis quit his job. Hope he'll get another one. I also think there must have been tender moments. Btw is that pic from when Aguirre spied on Ennis & Jack?

Date: 2011-07-24 05:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lara-pinta.livejournal.com
So Ennis does the asking, I like the twist.

A great read, always with your writing.

Thank you
Lorna
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