south

[morrobay1990]

Title: south
Author: morrobay1990
Warning: more self-indulgence
Genre: post canon
Word count: 100
Disclaimer: Jack & Ennis are AP's
♥ Jack












he dreamed of the mountain
looking south the sky goes on forever
looking south to texas

what stopped him
drive to the horizon
drive south to the horizon
dream fades to black
red
gray
where is his soul
past the horizon
south
south to texas

when he was scared
he was fearless
when he hesitated
he led him on
when he was alone
he was there
but always went
south
south to texas

what of his soul
who will save it
what of his love
who will have it
what will become

nothing now
no north east west
no south

Comments

[juliathecat.livejournal.com]

Beautiful.

Nothing, nowhere

[soulan.livejournal.com]

*heart clenches* (even after nearly 6 years).

[lightning070]

Such a sad story. :( I can't decide if it's Jack or Ennis thinking but I got a feeling it's Ennis, expressing his sorrow after Jack. :(
Kudos!

[kizziecat.livejournal.com]

Beautiful but so sad, especially the last 3 lines. But what can you do. Ennis and ourselves have just got to bear it.

[l-rabbit.livejournal.com]

I agree, this is Ennis thinking of Jack. So sad and lonesome...

Very expressive. Thank you.

Leslie

[eandj.livejournal.com]

I like it
thanks
Paula

[jadband.livejournal.com]

Heartbreaking and not easy to read. Absolutely not easy. Ursel

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

thank you, Julia.

Re: Nothing, nowhere

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

Oh, yes! I was listening to a youtube clip at work...Ennis..."I'm nothin...I'm nowhere..."

rips my heart out everytime.....

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

exactly right...Ennis, after Jack...

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

it's much easier to bear with like-minded Brokies...thank you.

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

thanks for reading, Leslie...

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

thanks, Paula

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

Oh, sweetie! I know it's not easy...thank you, though

Sad and true

[joetheone.livejournal.com]

Looking at a horizon can always stir memories and love lost and love gone. Joe

[selina31.livejournal.com]

Still heartbreaking.
Lovely and thank you for this.

Selina