Come / Don't Come, Private Lesson

[morrobay1990]

Title: Come / Don't Come...Private Lesson
Author: morrobay1990
Genre: au!au, follow-up, fluffffff
Warning:
Word count: 60
Disclaimer: They're AP's







Imagination in play: Ennis won at craps and met Jack for a drink at the bar...now they're in a hotel room, Ennis up against a wall (use your favorite place, what they're wearing or not, how his voice sounds) and Jack's giving it to him...a private lesson, I mean...using his hands to help explain the intricacies of the game...

And in this one, … = kiss, but not only on the lips, of course...









Now...most people...play the pass line...like you did...tonight...

It pays...pretty...good...odds...

But you just never...know...how the dice...are gonna land...

So...after...the shooter...makes the point...you can bet...the...come...line...

See...some people...see it...as bettin...with the house...and against...the shooter...

Cause if the shooter...rolls...a seven...they lose...but...if you're...on the come line...you win...

Yeah...you win...you win...

And that's...the come line...

Now...let's make sure...you got it...

See if you...can explain it... to me...

Comments

[sjmarv.livejournal.com]

This is hilarious! Glad to see you...write some...happy action...with the boys...not just angst!

Susan

[lightning070]

Jack's cheeky. ;D I'm glad Ennis's secure enough in his life to invite another man to his room... for a private lesson. ;) Great story!

[soulan.livejournal.com]

Not sure Ennis was able to absorb that lesson!

[roby100.livejournal.com]

Thanks for showing their lesson!
Very well done, I love the series. Hope you will write more.
A big hug
Roby