5 things Ennis thought about on the drive home

[morrobay1990]

Title: 5 things Ennis thought about on the drive home
Author: morrobay1990
Genre: post canon
Warning:
Word count: 290
Disclaimer: Jack & Ennis are AP's

♥ Jack











5. Jack's mood.
I ain't stupid. I knew he wasn't pissed off because a no flat tire. It's us. Us being apart, that's what he was mad at. Thing is, he don't know I get that way, too. But with me, it happens when we ain't together...them times the rest a the year, when all we got is rememberin. When we're in the same room, same tent, I forget all that...try to forget all that...


4. The sex.
Jack sittin on that bed, me standin in front of him...felt so good...always does...like nothin I ever felt before. No damn woman ever made me feel so good. And the other...him on his knees in front a me, me fuckin him hard, both of us lovin it...and even the other way around...sure never thought...well... Only thing gets me through the months comin up. After this trip, got lots to think about...


3. The rest of his so-called life.
Least I got a job to go back to this time. Might hafta try to keep this one, ain't as bad as the others. Workin horses 'stead of sheep or cows sure is better...boss thinks I'm good, too...know a lot about ropin and ridin, sure, but takin care of 'em, maybe savin him some money on vets, that's what he likes. Okay with me...

2. The next time
I sure don't wanna wait another six months...I'm gonna start talkin about it soon as I get back...lettin 'em know I'll need a couple days off in Febuary...Jack can get the time, ain't no problem there...but I sure can't wait no damn six months...

1. Home
Never knew two weeks in a damn cabin with Jack could feel more like home than any place I ever been.

Comments

[sjmarv.livejournal.com]

ENNIS!! Get a clue!!

Interesting stift here; maybe Ennis will make some changes? Await where you're taking these. You do cannon so well, but now and then you offer a great alternate ending. Thanks.

Susan

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

Damn, I guess I missed it.

I was trying to show that Ennis HAD a clue...that he KNEW. He just couldn't "fix" it.

I don't see any alternate ending here...guess I didn't get my point across very well.

I wanted to show without a doubt that Ennis missed Jack and wanted to be with him - the sweet life - but doesn't know how to do it.

He knows why Jack was mad/upset: that they're not together, and he feels the same...

He recoginzes that he likes sex with Jack, that the thoughts of it are the only thing that get him through their time apart...He wants to get together sooner...he feels "at home" with Jack like he never had before..

[sjmarv.livejournal.com]

Wouldn't say you missed it; I just like to read the sweet life into every J/E story!

[lara-pinta.livejournal.com]

You show a deep understanding of the inner man, that is Ennis in this one.

Thank you
Lorna

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

I wish I could change him...change everything.

thanks
n

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

Hi Tracy
Right, his fear. He loved Jack, but just couldn't forget. I never blamed him, it was just his past...not that he's real, or anything :/

thanks for commenting