Quit

[morrobay1990]

Title: Quit
Author: morrobay1990
Genre: canon
Warning:
Word count: 100
Disclaimer: Jack & Ennis are AP's

♥ Jack









Another year gone, another one comin...

Three times last year...maybe more this year...

Then what? After this year?

What's gonna happen?

Will they be together?

No.

Never.

Just can't be that way.

Does he want it?

Probably does, but I don't.

Do I love him?

Guess so...always have, I reckon.

Doesn't fix everything, though...love can't fix everything.

So...what happens if we quit?

Then what?

Be lonesome for sure.

Lonesome now, though...

But it would be worse...never seein him...

Don't know if I could do that...

And how would me and the girls make it alone?

Comments

[soulan.livejournal.com]

Ouch. That last line automatically brings up an image of Monroe, waiting in the wings.

pain

[joetheone.livejournal.com]

3 times a year and counting the minutes between is it really worth it? I don't know I think it is not worth it sometimes. But then love does strange things to all of us including me. Joe

[ramona4jake.livejournal.com]

oh, Ennis, you could've solved all this so easily !!....

[jacks-key.livejournal.com]

Very well done! :)

[juliathecat.livejournal.com]

Am I reading things wrong or is this from Alma's point of view?

Very well done, girl.

Thanks
Jules

excellent

[gnashsang.livejournal.com]

yes, that last line makes you think!

[lara-pinta.livejournal.com]

I wasn't sure of whose POV this was until the last line, very clever.

Thank you
Lorna