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Title: Dead of Winter
Author: [livejournal.com profile] morrobay1990
Warning:
Genre: canon
Word count: 150
Disclaimer: They are AP's
♥ Jack






dead of winter 1


“Jack.”

“What?”

“You awake?”

“Whatdyawant?”

“Nothin……………………………………………………………………………………………sorry about before.”

“Forget it.”

“I was thinkin…”

“Christ, now what?”

“Gonna be seven months til next time...”

“Told ya I can’t make it no sooner!”

“I know, I know…but maybe we oughta…”

“What?”

“I don’t know…make this one real good.”

Was good…still is, you know that…maybe that’s the problem.”

What's the problem? Turn around if we’re gonna talk.”

“Thing is…OW!”

“Sorry.”

“Slice me open with them hipbones.”

“Said sorry.”

“Thing is, we don’t talk…don’t hardly never talk.”

“Better things to do….only got so long.”

“Where you goin?”

“JD.”

“Gimme some.”

“Guess after all these years you know I’m better at talkin after some a this.”

“Fuck, don’t matter...we don’t gotta talk.”

“Jack...c'mere.........c'mere, darlin........”

“Makin me forget what I wanted to say anyway...”

Said there’s better things to do than talk.....c‘mere, you wanna see?.......................................want me to show ya what's better?..........................Huh?......"

“Fuckin show me......”

"I’ll show ya........show ya all fuckin night.”
















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Date: 2012-08-18 03:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soulan.livejournal.com
They got this close to talking. Jack says they never talk, but he doesn't seem to recognize that Ennis was preparing himself to do just that. Is Jack resentful that Ennis can't talk about them without alcohol? Or is he afraid of what might happen when they actually do talk?

Date: 2012-08-18 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morrobay1990.livejournal.com
I think he's afraid to get shot down again...even though he wants to bring up them living together - he almost can't stop himself - but then he does, just in time to keep Ennis from wounding him...

thank you for keeping up with this...

Date: 2012-08-18 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gwylliondream.livejournal.com
Wow!

That was close.

They are both too distant for their own good.

Date: 2012-08-18 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morrobay1990.livejournal.com
Ennis gives what he can, I guess...been there, done that.

thank you-

Date: 2012-08-24 10:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] expletory.livejournal.com
"Slice me open with them hipbones." and “Jack...c'mere.........c'mere, darlin........” are two lines that seem very significant to me. those are very acknowledging of what their relationship is. the last two lines also seem like clear, straight forward communication. I think that's just as important as the discussion they have about whether they should talk and whether they use to talk. Ennis seems like he's comfortable with what he lets on.

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