October 14

[morrobay1990]

Title: October 14
Author: morrobay1990
Warning:
Genre: canon/1990
Word count: 150
Disclaimer: They are AP's
♥ Jack












Sunday morning, and he’d promised to drive Junior and the kids to church and take them home after.

He sat in a beat up lawn chair outside his trailer drinking his second cup of coffee and trying to decide what to do for the hour they’d be in church, since he sure wasn’t going, finally settled on stopping at the diner for breakfast since it was good, cheap and fast, and he figured he could put up with Deena, the waitress, asking him about his love life for the time it would take him to eat two eggs, four pieces of bacon, two pieces of toast, and have another cup of coffee.

Deena was a nice enough woman and he’d tossed around in his head more than once asking her for coffee or something, the something being a fuck, but she was a bit long-faced, and while horses were his favorite animal, he preferred them in his barn and not in his bed.

Comments

Torment

[joetheone.livejournal.com]

The unsung truth of loneliness and not wanting to be apart of the world yet yearning for something we cannot have. Joe

[deevah2.livejournal.com]

WOW! Ennis, shame on you thinking such thoughts! on Sunday morning no less! LOL!

D

[gwylliondream.livejournal.com]

Poor Ennis! So lonely and looking for a connection.

[mazaher.livejournal.com]

Wow. You get one side of Ennis (but then, everybody have it in one form or another) which is often missed. The practical side, the what's-in-it-for-me side, the side which allows one to get by sharing seventeen dollars in a coffee tin with other two people. Well done, thanks.

Re: Torment

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

Yeah, he's lonely, but in this case he's also kind of mean for thinking of the waitress that way...not mean, exactly, but thoughtless.

thanks again for reading-

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

You got it, baby! He's far from perfect but has the nerve to think she's not pretty enough for him...and on Sunday!

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

but she's not good enough for him...maybe it's just an excuse...

thanks

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I wanted to show a glimpse of his other side, not cruel, just human, which he is...he's not really a superhero.

thanks for reading all this.....

[eandj.livejournal.com]

yes- thinking about Deena in this way is just mean, but I want to concentrate on the breakfast.It's nice he's doing things with his daughter and his grandkids and actually going out - even if it's for breakfast. Sounds like luxury to me
good for Ennis
Paula