Comfort

[morrobay1990]

Title: Comfort
Author: morrobay1990
Genre: After.......
Warning:
Word count: 100
Disclaimer: Jack & Ennis are AP's
♥ Jack











Lookin in, I got a good life.

Let's break it down in memo form:

• Pretty wife: Lureen'd make anybody proud to be seen with her. I was attracted to her right away, myself...and she could fuck...damn, she could fuck...I mean, that's how I ended up here, right?
  
  
• Good job: Guess I'm a pretty good salesman...accent on “pretty”. You'd be surprised at the...well, you'd be surprised...
  
  
• Nice house: Gotta admit I like livin in a place like this...2200 square feet...my bedroom's bigger than the barn in Lightn...
  

Only one thing missin...and that is the comfort not found...

Comments

[soulan.livejournal.com]

I can just see Jack sitting at his desk thinking about this, maybe even actually writing it down.

1. The "myself" and "right?" add so much to those lines

2. Maybe we'd be surprised, but tell us anyway. ;)

3. Cutting off LF adds so much. It makes me stop and think about the place and what's hidden there.