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Title: A Day in the Life / December 30
Author: [livejournal.com profile] morrobay1990
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Genre: canon/1990
Word count: 280
Disclaimer: They are AP's
♥ Jack











dec 30






All it took to bring back those early memories was being in the mountains again.





”Them sheep’ll drift if I don’t get back there tonight!”

“You’ll get pitched off your mount in a storm like this, wish you hadn’t tried it! Close it up!”






He never thought he’d be glad to see a hailstorm...

Didn’t even start out like that...he was worried about the damn sheep...when it came to a bad storm, how much did he owe Aguirre? Should he risk himself, the horse, to try to ride out...

Jack said no...thank God.

They’d started just sitting in the tent and drinking...howling cold outside the tent, cold inside but after a few times passing the bottle back and forth it was only natural to them, now, to share the bedroll, share their body heat...and it just took off from there...

They never talked about the sex...other things, sure...ranch life, growing up, parents, siblings (only Ennis), even school – what they liked and hated...best horses they’d owned...what they would do if they had a million dollars...

But in the tent that night...storm wailing...hail hitting the tent so hard he’d swear it’d get tore up, but them safe together...Jack said words that had silenced him then...

“What do you want?”

Silenced him because he didn’t know what he wanted, in this situation or any other, never having been asked the question before.

Jack kept asking...what do you want?...kept slowly pushing up against Ennis, the tip of his cock pressing wetly into his stomach...forward...back...forward...teasing

What do you want?...slow...maddening...rubbing...Jack’s voice rough with need, want...breathing hard...hands moving...back arching...hips pushing...pressing, lunging, prodding...

Answering this question was simpler than he’d ever thought







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Wanting

Date: 2012-12-30 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cwby30.livejournal.com
Mornin'.

Well, all of us have had that question asked of us, whether by someone else or by one's self to one's self. What do you want? Often the answer is confused into what do you "need." You made it so clear, that Ennis knew what he wanted and what he needed, but could never accept and act upon. Which led to a life of disquietude. I like the picture, how Ennis especially tried to close out the rest of the world and retreat into his own little tent.

Thanks again.

Bud

hmmm

Date: 2012-12-30 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joetheone.livejournal.com
Nice way to ride out a storm then to ride out your lover to the end. Joe

Date: 2012-12-31 12:46 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] sid401k.livejournal.com
I've always wondered what they got up to in that tent during the hailstorm...

Date: 2012-12-31 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mazaher.livejournal.com
"...he didn’t know what he wanted." I think cwby30 is right, that's the problem: Ennis never even dreamed that what he wanted may one day be relevant...
Thank you, and a happy slide into the new year
Edited Date: 2012-12-31 01:56 pm (UTC)

Date: 2013-01-01 01:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gwylliondream.livejournal.com
Oh, what a gem of a series this is! I'm so sorry I couldn't keep up with it while it was posting. I'm so glad to see all the other readers' comments though, giving your fic the attention it deserves.

Thanks so much for writing all of this. I tried to treat each entry as a separate entity, not wanting to rush through. You have written some real treasures here.

Happy New Year to you!

Date: 2013-01-01 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] argenti79.livejournal.com
I enjoy reading this series very much!
Thank you and Happy New Year!
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