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Title: “...and he found ways to spend it.” - 6
Author: [livejournal.com profile] morrobay1990
Genre: post canon
Warning:
Word count: 265
Disclaimer: Jack & Ennis are AP's
♥ Jack



”Down in Texas Jack's father-in-law died and Lureen, who inherited the farm equipment business, showed a skill for management and hard deals. Jack found himself with a vague managerial title, traveling to stock and agricultural shows. He had some money now and found ways to spend it."













He recognized it but wouldn't try to analyze it til later, much later

Jack was astonished to realize that at this time in his sexual life that there were so many firsts that night...that there were new things and that they came so easily to him with such a guide as Mike

First time he didn't close his eyes and think of his hands, lips, tongue as being on Ennis when he and Mike had sex

First time he hadn't had to stop himself from saying that name

First time he let another man take over

First time he was asked what he wanted...what..and how...and for how long, how fast, how slow – Mike wanting to be the one to please Jack, but more than that – he wanted to know how Jack liked to be pleased...that was it

First time another man showed him, really showed him what he wanted – wanting Jack to want to please him

First time his orgasms were eased from him, or pulled from him, or violently erupted from him...but not torn...first time he knew there was a difference

First time Ennis had receded from his mind

Near three in the morning Jack had drifted toward sleep, but fighting it and vowing to remember everything they had done, so they could rise in the morning and do exactly the same things

He feel asleep mezmorizing...no, memorizing...Mike

Michael.

danger ahead will robison

Date: 2011-05-11 03:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] joetheone.livejournal.com
Okay well maybe this is good but maybe this is bad who knows but I think he has a lot of skills to think about. Joe

Date: 2011-05-11 03:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] soulan.livejournal.com
Wow, I'm really curious to see what happens between Jack and Ennis on their next fishing trip. (If there is one.)

Date: 2011-05-11 04:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sjmarv.livejournal.com
Boy, he's had a lot of crappy sex in his life, huh?

Date: 2011-05-11 06:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eandj.livejournal.com
I think Jack deserves this
Paula

Date: 2011-05-11 09:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tizi17.livejournal.com
i nearly missed this story.. and it really is great to think about that single phrase you put above the story.. because it actually does open different thoughts..

do i like jack enjoying somebody else's company? being a brokie i obviously don't. do i like michael? yes...does jack deserve it? sure...
am i curious to see what you make out of this? hell yeah!

Date: 2011-05-12 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mazaher.livejournal.com
Oh, *good*! A meaningful new perspective on things. Thanks, Michael... (Now I'm worrying about him, though).

Date: 2011-05-25 02:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lara-pinta.livejournal.com
"First time Ennis had receded from his mind" God how that line hurts but what truthfulness there is to your writing.

Thank you
Lorna
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