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Title: Dead of Winter
Author: [livejournal.com profile] morrobay1990
Warning:
Genre: canon
Word count: 120
Disclaimer: They are AP's
♥ Jack








dead of winter 1







“Thought you was sleepin.”

“Figured that.”

“So?”

“So what?”

“You hear everything?”

“Heard enough.”

“What’s that mean?”

“Means you must be drunker than I am.”

“Must be.”

“Did ya mean it?”



“.....”



“Ennis.”

“Yeah.”

“Did ya...”

“I heard ya.”

“So?”

“Yeah.”

“Took ya long enough.”

“Move over.”

“I’m up against the wall as it is.”

“This way, darlin.”

“Mmm, feels real good.”

“Never did this with Alma much...better with you.”

“Damn, more words. Why you think that is? That you like layin close with me better than Alma?”

“Never spent no time thinkin about it.”

“Maybe cause I feel better than Alma…you feel better than Lureen.”

“Thanks a lot.”

“I’m just sayin...”

“Don’t know why it is...just is.”





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Date: 2012-07-27 02:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gwylliondream.livejournal.com
This is a great experiment! I think it would be particularly useful for someone who wanted to improve their dialogue writing skills.

The “.....” is perfect, but it must be so difficult to only have used it once.

Looking forward to more of this.

I'm all about meta!!

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