Dead of Winter

[morrobay1990]

Title: Dead of Winter
Author: morrobay1990
Warning:
Genre: canon
Word count: 140
Disclaimer: They are AP's
♥ Jack












"Still hungry?"

"Gimme a smoke."

"Want any a this?"

"Not now…….but don’t finish it."

"Shit, even I couldn’t drink a whole bottle by myself."

"Yeah, I bet."

"So?"

"What?"

"Thought you wanted to talk."

"I wanna talk……you don’t wanna listen."

"How many times we been over this?"

"Well, let’s see, Ennis….I been drivin up here two three times a year for ‘leven, twelve years. You keepin track? Had a good idea, still a good idea...you just don’t wanna hear it..."

"Been this way since we started...ain’t nothin new I’m tellin ya."

"No. Ain’t nothin new...why can’t you see it? We could do it. We could do it. Be hard, so what? This ain’t hard? This is..."

"This don’t get us killed, Jack! Why can’t you see it?"




"There’s dyin and dyin, Ennis."

Comments

[soulan.livejournal.com]

Just a technical thing, but I prefer to have the quotation marks. Without them it feels a little step away from their voices.

I think they need to get up and out of the cabin for a while.

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

yeah, I'll put " " back next time, I was tired, or maybe lazy.

As for leaving the cabin, 'fraid not, they're stuck there with each other.