Dead of Winter

[morrobay1990]

Title: Dead of Winter
Author: morrobay1990
Warning:
Genre: canon
Word count: 100
Disclaimer: They are AP's
♥ Jack














“Hey.”
“What.”
“What time is it?”
“I don’t know...still dark...middle of the damn night.”





“That was good before.”
“Yeah.”
“Don’t sound like it was good.”
“Yeah.”





“Still wanna talk?”
“No.”
“Could if ya want……get up, get the fire going...”
“Don’t make no difference to me.”
“Come on, Jack……got four more days up here...got time to talk if ya want.”
“Said it don’t matter...’sides I’m tired.”
“Well, I’m gettin up, stir that fire up...kinda hungry, too…maybe get some a
that deer meat outta the truck, you want some?...still some JD in that bottle.“
“………………………………………………………………………………………………open another one, then, if we’re gonna talk.”

Comments

[morrobay1990.livejournal.com]

I hope your summer was busy in a good way.

Thanks for your comment, you really said a lot!

I'm doing an experiment to see if I can write an all-dialogue series...and sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't.

In the lines you referenced below, I wanted Ennis to try to make up to Jack for being, well, you know...Ennis! He knows Jack wants to talk, but he can't always accept what Jack has to say; so it's Ennis saying it was good and Jack saying "yeah"...like yeah, whatever...but he can't stay mad at Ennis......and neither can I....


I cannot quite catch whom is saying what in the exchanges "That was good before." "Yeah." "Don't sound like it was good." "Yeah." but I do like that one of them is trying to convince the other about how it felt.

thanks again